T3 W1 writing

in our writing workshop we had to start a story on Hansel and Gretel in our workshop we described them walking into the forest and finding the ginger bread house.

here are my sentences

The somber forlorn forest was like an endless pit of darkness and silence; it made Hansel feel dismal; It had daunting branches that curved in like hands about to grab you. Walking deeper into mysterious woods who know what awaits. “I'm petrified” muttered Hansel “when can we go home!” soon I answered deep down knowing we may never find a way home, 

We walked further into the forest trying to find a way to get out. Going deeper and deeper into the 

I smelt something pleasant. It was chocolaty and yet fruity with a delightful minty smell and a kick off ginger all in one wafting in the air. I looked down at my stomach. Hansel was also looking like a skeleton. We were fading away. We had to follow this scrumptious smell. 

After walking and walking endlessly we just kept on walking. we arrived at what looked like a candy house. It had gummies and cookies all around with thick frosting on the roof. No matter how ravenous we were, we didn't want to eat the house. What if some creepy person lived there so we waited, we waited anxiously just waiting and waiting. We were waiting for a long time. We were sure someone had abandoned this house but why?.

Hansel couldn't take it any longer he pounced out from behind the tree and took one big bite at the house. I went to go grab him but the smell hooked me in. I couldn’t resist. I had to get a bite and it was only gonna be one bite I swear. I picked a corner off the roof. It was light and chewy but salty at the same time it made me very piquant. I had to have another bite. I shattered a part of the window. It was crunchy and tasted like a thinly glazed coating of sugar  “Hansel stop!’’. He was eating off the bottom what if the house fell we shouldn't do that the house might collapse.

Hansel and I jumped away from the house.

come next week to see the next part of this story!

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