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Then we had to edit/rework our chosen paragraph.
Here is mine.
Before:
In 1885 Kate Sheppard founded WCTU (women's christian temperance union). Two years later Kate Sheppard became the leader of it’s suffrage campaign. The goal for the WCTU was to protect the home from all evil influences and strengthen family life. It’s main objective was to help stop abstinence from alcohol.
After:
In 1885 Kate Sheppard founded the WCTU (Women's Christian Temperance Union). Two years later Kate Sheppard became the leader of it’s suffrage campaign. The goal for WCTU was to protect the home from all evil influences and bolster family life. However it’s main objective was to help stop abstinence from alcohol.
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