This week for writing we took a break from speeches and got to make any poems of our choice I chose lock down. I than made 3 haiku's and a mostly rhyming poem.
Here is my work.
I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
This week for writing we took a break from speeches and got to make any poems of our choice I chose lock down. I than made 3 haiku's and a mostly rhyming poem.
Here is my work.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora Frankie!
ReplyDeleteAwesome job on the poems! I hope you are well in your bubble and keeping busy, and hopefully we will be back in level 2 soon. I can see you have put a lot of effort into these poems, ka pai!
Miss Holden